I Wrote An Essay For A School Exam And In 25 Mins Accidentally Created A (Hopefully) Masterpiece

For an english exam I recently had, I had to write a descriptive essay on a haunted forest and I came up with this. It took about 15-20 mins to write, and later I added modifications to it and decided to add this to my 'book' (on whattpad: Blades of fire and hearts of ice, will add it in the next 10-12 chapters). I'm open for any critisism and compliments, so pls tell me what u think :)

I tried to make it as non-creepy as possible, because my teacher told me 'You are only 12, try to keep your writting a little less dark' soooo happy reading